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**GRADE 5: ADEQUATE** Sample of Student Work

The item I chose for this report is my hockl hockey stick. It is my pride posetion. The stick is called a "Z Bubble". On the ice it is my lucky charm because I used it in try outs for the atom AA team and made it. I got the stick at sport check in west Edmonton Mall. It has been stepped on by skates, and kicked around but is still a great stick.

I believe that whenever I use it I play 120 percent better. I used it in probobly 99 out of 100 times this year. I would say that it is one of the best stick I have gotten out of every stick I ewa have owned. I got 28 goals this year and all of them were scored with my Z bubble. If I could I would defmetly take this stick everywher everywhere I went. But unfortunatly I can't.

The next stick that I buy will probably be a Z bubble. I hope to score many more goals with this stick. I can't wait untill next year to start using my stick again. Ws I think this stek stick is the best stick in the world of hockey.