Student+Writing+Grade+6-Adequate

**GRADE 6: ADEQUATE**


 * Sample of Student Work**

Writing

The object that I am writing about is the puck I scored my first goal with. It has alot of chuncks taken out of the puck. On the top it had a coolers light sticker on it. I got it from the referee after everybody got off of me. All the refdid was laugh at me while they dog-piled me.

It is special to me because it was the first puck I had ever scored with. It is also special to mebecause when I scored I looked at the time box and my dad had an incredible smile on his face, and to me that is very special. It is one of the most special things I have.