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[[image:pogo.gif width="165" height="207"]]**Hello Bubble Boy, reggytony and legoman124!**
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 * The Missing Master Sword**

It was in the Kingdom of Hyrule in a castle that there lived Princess Zelda and her knight Link. One night a thief sunk into the Master Sword room and stole it Suddenly Princess Zelda woke up and asked, “What was that?” So she got up and woke link“what?” growled Link. “I heard a noise ”whispered Princess Zelda. they looked around the castle and then they seen it. The Master Sword was gone “Eep” yelped Princess Zelda. “where is the master sword” “I don't know” answered Link. “But we will search for it tomorrow.” Next morning they search, they found footprints going on and on but then it started to rain. The footprints started to wash away. “Oh no the tracks are gone now how are we going to find the thief?” cried princess Zelda then in a blink of an eye a swordsman appeared. “I've got him” yelled link so he pulled out his sword and they started to fight they clashed swords then Link scraped the other swordsman. “aaaarrr I will return,” yelled the swordsman and he jumped back and scurried away. “Good job Link” exclaimed princess Zelda, “now lets go look in the lost forest” exclaimed Link.

So they set off into the lost forest. They looked behind trees and even under big rocks. A small rock hit Link in the head “hey” hissed Link, he turned around and their was the swordsman. “Hey he has the master sword” yelled princess Zelda. Suddenly link jumped at him without thinking and tried to slash him with his sword but missed and then the swordsman scratched him on the arm. “Link!!!!!!!!!!” yelled princess Zelda, “I'm aright” link said weakly. then they both striked at the same time, swords clashed together then the sword fell at of the hands of the swordsman on to the ground. “I'll give up and I well give you the master sword” pleaded the tried swordsman. “OK but you're going to the dungeon” declared Link, so they did and after that they put the sword back in the helt. And that's how the the master sword got stole and and how they got it back.

The End

The Case Of The Vandalized Grave By Bubbleboy

I was riding my bike at 7:00 P.M. on Saturday night when Joe the cemetery keeper tells me, “John someone vandalized a grave at about 6:30 P.M., right before opening time! The only ones around at the time were Jimmy, Bobby and Tom with the broken hand, but I would never accuse Jimmy of doing it because he works at the cemetery with me part time. Do you know who did it? I replied back with I'd try to figure it out. I went over to the vandalized grave and saw red spray paint all over the grave stone. I looked over and saw a small, paint coated hand print on a bottle of spray paint. Right beside it was a shoe print. I went back to Joe and asked, “ Do you know where the vandalizers went?” He then said no. Just then Joe's assistant Jimmy came out bare footed and said, “I know where they went. They went to the old mill!” I took my bike and pedaled my way to the old mill. When I got there I could see a small hand behind a hay cart. Bobby came out and yelled,“ Hi John!” He then called for Tom to come out, I then asked Bobby, “ did you see anybody vandalize a grave at the cemetery?” Bobby then said, “no I haven't” I then said ,“I don't think your telling the truth!”

How Did I Solve It?

Jimmy was barefooted when he told me where the vandalizers went and the foot print at the grave had a shoe print, and Jimmy wasn't wearing any shoes, so it couldn't of been him. Tom had a broken hand at the time so he couldn't have spray painted the tomb stone, Now it all came down to Bobby, he had a small hand and their was a small hand print on the spray paint bottle, so it had to be him in the end!

World War 2 Assassination By Levi

It was world war two in 1941 May when England, Poland, Russia, USA and Canada were fighting the Germans. I was in the Canadian army fighting off the Germans in Chamois, the greatest battle in all of world war two. We were pushing back the Germans to the edge of the city when a man behind me pulls a knife and stabs me in the arm. I try to call for help but my team is already too far ahead, the man lunges for me but I grabbed his arm weakly as blood leaked through my cam-o shirt. The knife was getting closer and closer to my neck as I struggled to keep the knife away, I then gave all my strength to reach my rifle. I quickly grabbed my gun and bashed the man with the end of my gun right in the stomach. The man stumbled backwards dropping the knife beside my shoulder. The man got up and ran away startled. I lied there, dazed not knowing who could of done this to me, with my arm soaked in blood the pain spread through my body......

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